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GWS Private Lecture: Harvard Book Store Panel Discussion on The Best American Short Stories 2010

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We all know and love the Best American series.  While no reader is going to love EVERY story published in EVERY edition, the Best American books are must-haves for a few reasons:

  1. The stories are, by and large, really good.  Each was selected for its original publication out of thousands of stories.  Then Ms. Pitlor winnowed the field down to a hundred or so.  Then the guest author shared Ms. Pitlor’s enthusiasm for the piece enough to include it in the volume.  The cream rises to the top, right?
  2. The stories represent a common canon for short story writers.  Can every writer read every story out there?  Of course not.  But we need common cultural touchstones and Best American stories are a good foundation.  Let’s say you’re in a workshop and someone has written a story in a diary format; but your colleague is missing the mark.  It’s not very effective to say, “Hey, have you read that 1997 story that was in a print journal with a 600-copy print run?”  Of course your colleague hasn’t read the story.  If we have a common reading list, you can simply refer to the George Saunders story from the 2013 volume.
  3. The Best American authors have a great track record of being or becoming rock stars.  If you look at the lists, Joyce Carol Oates is always there.  Alice Munro.  Ron Rash.  Steven Millhauser.  These and others are writers we should all know, if only for technical excellence.

So the Harvard Book Store was kind enough to set up a panel discussion in honor of the 2010 volume of Best American.  WGBH, Boston’s excellent PBS station, was kind enough to put the panel on YouTube for our enjoyment:

Who’s on the panel?

One of the many wonders brought about by the Internet is that we ALL now have the ability to enjoy these kinds of presentations.  Two decades ago, someone may have transcribed the authors’ comments and the result would be condensed and put into a journal somewhere.  Or the exchange would not b e preserved at all.  Today, we can continue our education in writing wherever we like!  (I don’t have a smartphone, so I can only watch it on a computer, but you get the idea.)

What are some things we can steal from the panel discussion?

Early on, Mr. Russo recounts an exchange in which he was asked what sets the 2010 volume of Best American apart from all others.  “The only thing that I could come up with was that I had been reading this wonderful anthology since 1978…the only thing that I could think was different this year was that this was the only year from 1978 that I’ve loved all twenty stories.”  Like I said, you’re not going to like EVERY story; and that’s fine.  The important thing is that we consider what we can learn from the work.

Mr. Russo points out that he had a bit of a conundrum during his reading process.  He’s only published one volume of short stories, so he believed that his mind was “tooled” to the specific needs of the novel.  We must bear in mind at all times that each genre and each type of work has a unique set of conventions and should be evaluated on their own terms.  A pulp crime novel is probably SUPPOSED to have dialogue that is short, clippy and to-the-point.  A literary novel may indeed have long sections devoted to a character’s internal life.

Mr. Mathews claims that he has a problem “starting” works.  I think a lot of us can relate.  (I know I certainly can.”  The solution he proposes?  We must stick with our original instincts and trust there there is something in the work that is worthwhile. 

The panelists discuss the difference between writing short stories and novels.  Mr. Almond describes the architecture of a novel as “not just one flip on a trapeze; it’s a whole bunch of them and they have to build.”  He elucidates that he may not be correct; novels he loves, such as Pride and Prejudice, are fairly simple on some level.  That book is a love story.  I suppose the big lesson is that all kinds of pieces are simultaneously simple and complicated.

Mr. Mathews hits on another important concept: we all must be good literary citizens.  How?  By reading literary magazines.  He points out that his students will sometimes ask him where to send a piece.  He will ask the student which journals he or she likes.  They will sometimes reply that they don’t read any.  No one can read EVERY journal, but we should all read and buy a ton of them.  This kind of dedication is the only way to understand what a journal likes.

There’s much more to this meaningful discussion; why not watch it for yourself and describe what you learned in the comments?

Cool and useful quotes:

  • Mr. Russo: “Falling in love with a short story is like falling in love with a person.  It just defies analysis.”
  • Mr. Russo: “The physical world…is a doorway into your characters’ lives…You can’t just listen to them talk.  You have to allow them their objects.  You have to find out what the important physical objects are in the world of the story.”
  • Mr. Almond on overcoming fear: “It still comes down to sitting down and outlasting your doubt.”
  • Mr. Russo: “When you’ve been at it a while, you really can polish a turd.  And it will shine.  But it’s still a turd.”
  • Mr. Mathews hinting at the sad state of short stories in American culture and preparing to celebrate that the selection of his story for Best American would bring attention to The Cincinnati Review: “I don’t think I’ve ever been published in a publication with a circulation more than 5,000.”
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What Can We Steal From Steve Almond’s “Donkey Greedy, Donkey Gets Punched”?

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Title of Work and its Form: “Donkey Greedy, Donkey Gets Punched,” short story
Author: Steve Almond
Date of Work: 2009
Where the Work Can Be Found: The story first appeared in Issue 40 of the excellent journal Tin House and was subsequently chosen by Richard Russo for The Best American Short Stories 2010.

Element of Craft We’re Stealing: Multimedia

Discussion:
If you’re new to literary pursuits, you may not have experienced the utterly strange kind of pleasure that I derived from this story.  I reviewed Issue 40 of Tin House for NewPages and loved Mr. Almond’s story a LOT.  Months and months later, I picked up the 2010 Best American and thought the first story seemed pretty familiar…  The book begins with that story I loved from Tin House!  Did I have anything at all to do with Mr. Almond’s story or the honors it received?  Of course not.  But I did feel that strange pleasure; I read a story I knew was great and important people subsequently agreed with me.  (It’s like when you see a minor league ballplayer you think is great and the guy goes on to a superstar career in the bigs.)

“Donkey Greedy, Donkey Get Punched” is a philosophical fight between Dr. Raymond Oss, a psychoanalyst, and Gary “Card” Sharpe, “enfant terrible of the World Poker Tour.”  Dr. Oss doesn’t tell his new patient that he has a somewhat unhealthy level of interest in poker and a bit too much of the love of gambling that rules Sharpe’s life.  Sharpe has many problems and doesn’t deal with them in a healthy way; he doesn’t want to change.  He loves his life and the excitement he feels from using his intellect and intuition to win money from people.  Their doctor/patient relationship ends with some acrimony.  In the climactic scene, Dr. Oss has relapsed and is again playing poker at Artichoke Joe’s when Sharpe (a superstar in the minds of the bushers at the table) strolls in and sees the Good Doctor.  What happens next?  As they said on Reading Rainbow: “read the book!”  (Dum dum dum dum!)

There’s so much we can steal from the story.  The first thing we should steal was clear to me when I read the story in Tin House, a journal that is particularly attractive and puts a lot of energy into its graphic design.  It can be very difficult to describe a card game.  Or a baseball game.  Or a soccer match.  Well, it’s not that hard to describe a soccer match.  Here’s my extremely American-sounding description of the most recent World Cup final:

The guy kicked it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds.  So the guy threw it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds. So the guy threw it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds. So the guy threw it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds. So the guy threw it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds. Time ran out, but the referee added eight more minutes just because.  So the guy threw it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds. So the guy threw it to another guy who kicked it to another guy, but he fell down so the guy from the other team kicked the ball, but then the ball was kicked out of bounds. Then one of the teams celebrated.

Mr. Almond makes it easy to understand the climactic hand of poker that Dr. Oss and Sharpe play at the end of the story.  How?  He inserted simple graphics into the story, like so:

almond donkeyA written description would likely be less effective.  (Especially if I write it.)

Dr. Oss was dealt the ace of spades and the king of hearts.

There are a number of steps in a hand of hold ‘em…Mr. Almond presents the information in a clear way that just so happens to avoid words.

What else should we steal from Mr. Almond?  He populated his story with a protagonist and an antagonist.  Dr. Oss wants to help Sharpe to attain mental health and to beat Sharpe in a hand of poker.  You better bet that Sharpe tosses down a whole bunch of obstacles to prevent Dr. Oss from achieving those goals.

What Should We Steal?

  • Capitalize upon the advantages of visual media when possible.  Yes, yes.  A picture is worth a thousand words, but you can’t just print out five pictures and staple them together and send them to Tin House.  You can, however, make use of the benefits of visual media when possible.  Instead of describing a bunch of playing cards, for example, you can include images.  There’s an added benefit; folks who play poker will remain in your narrative that much more because they’re seeing the cards in a form to which they’re already accustomed.
  • Equip a story with a clear protagonist and a clear antagonist.  Your main character should have very clear desires and there should be someone who is always throwing obstacles in the poor guy’s way.  Think of a Bond movie.  Bond wants to disable a communications satellite and the bad guy wants to keep using the satellite…and to kill Bond, of course.
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